Someday

 

 

The last place I wanted to be

Was in yet another junkie squat

Breathing in second hand smoke

Over the counter of an old tobacconists

Some things in this life I think I might miss

But not this

 

Light filters through the folded shutters

A morning from which I tried to hide

Isolating the patches of smog

I took a peek out onto the world outside

And have a glance at what life should be like

A contrast to my life

 

Forgotten but not irrevocably

I’ll emerge from this someday

Very nearly threw this much away

Time to make something of this day

Reviews

[Hold Fast Hope]

"I take a peek out onto the world outside
And have a glance at what life should be like"

I love this line and the whole thing for that matter. I love the way you write. very good

[Ismael Rodriguez Jr.]

Really cool write with some fantastic imagery. Reading this pulled me right into it.

[Dice Rosenthal]

Hmm,, this reminds me of the Jumpsuit Apparatus (it's a band lol). Just the way it's written. And great imagery...yep. I"m really sorry if this is a schise review, but i'm too hyped on sugar,caffiene to do much better. Good job, really =D

i like this...
....it's really good
"somethings in life i might miss but not this"

the images and smells/tastes
second hand smoke

nice one issac

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