Unsaid

another poem about people leaving your life and moving on!

I don't know how to say this

but I can't keep it in anymore

Its going to be hard letting you go

but days have gone

feelings forgotten

walk through it all alone

memories feel rotten

can't forget the voices in my head

knowing the times we had weren't too bad

maybe if we tried, would we have survived?

would we have burned down and cried?

can't breath with this weight on my shoulder

can't pretend that we'll be alright

but i need to find myself

and make my soul come to light

doesn't mean i'm getting rid of you

just means i'm moving on with my life

I'm not ready to leave the past behind

being burned in my mind 

trying to walk through the empty roads

holding on to whatever goes. 

Author's Note

thank you for reading my work, that is already enough for me !

Reviews

[Emrick]

So sad. I can imagine how it feels like when a relationship fails.No matter how much tears one shed, they will eventually dry.Meaning we have to move on.There are plenty of ways to find happiness again.
Nice poem!

[Maria M]

thank emrick i'm glad you like it :)

[patti]

That is good write indeed, very expressional peom, everyone at some point have to go through of letting go of someone when love have died out... as one said love is like grief it fades away... nice job :)

[Maria M]

Thanks so much Patti, I'm glad you've enjoyed it :)

[Christopher Booyakasha]

Very nice write Maria. I enjoy reading your stuff. Can't wait for more! Nice Job!

[Maria M]

Thanks so much Chris! X

[Nick.B]

Well done expressing your feelings, a lost love is one of the worst, the fact that he/she can't love you, but you still do....well done with this one

[Maria M]

yes Nick i guess it is one of the worst... glad you liked it and thanks :D

[zainul]

This is a vivid presentation telling about the reality of leaving someone.

[Maria M]

thank you Zainul glad you liked it!

[zainul]

You are welcome,lovely poet!

[kayamon215]

very well written good job on this :)

[Maria M]

Thank you!!! :) :)

[Nithin Purple]

lovely poem maria m

[Maria M]

thank you so much :)