A Great Confidant

For my sister. ;)

            Juicy gossips you always bring.
            On my side you always sing.
            A great sister you've been,
            No doubt if to you I always lean.


            My little vanities to you I always tell,
            Absolutely you always listen very well.
            Reliable we are to each other,
            Indeed you are my confidence-booster.
            Even you always tease me, you are such a great confidant.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think. :)

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautiful Tribute. Well done young poet well done!

[alison13]

this is simply adorable. great job. your sister would truly love this. :)

[Shalini Dinesh]

hey thats cool, nice.... hope your sister is happy to get a loving sister dedicating to her and cute poem :)

[Haifa]

Oh I just read that its for your sister, its so nice I am sure she will like it. and its nice from you to write for your sister.

[jhed]

aww..what a thoughtful sister..you wrote for your little sister..I hope I got a sister like that..haha.. Jane you've been very good at this since you've started..I am very proud of you..keep it up!

[Simple_mee]

Very sweet !! A great ode to ur sister... I loved this !! :)

[Dev]

I like the idea behind it .. really nice that way.. The flow comes and goes but otherwise.. good!!

[Holly-Marie]

Very clever, interesting and powerful.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I enjoyed this. It was very awesome. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

great family values.....needed today..thanks Maryjaneuy