Remebering What Inspiration Is

about our moms. :)

On that day
In bed I lay
You said I was a gift
With no BUTs and IFs
You gave me name
And that stays the same
I face life without fears
'Cause I'm with you for so many years
I learned many things
In which life brings
You are always there
You show me that you care
Through thick and thin,
To you I always lean
Thanks for everything
Because of you I can now do anything
Mom, thank you
For being my inspiration.
For being my role model.
For being my guardian.
And now I'm taking this chance to say,
You mean every little thing to me.
I love you.

Author's Note

Another work of mine. Hope you like it. :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for your mother. No stronger or better love then the love of your mother. I like the description and the very good ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem! I knew the first time I read this it was a winner.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

I can just see the pride on your mother's face. Well done young poet well done!

[Daydreamer54]

aww! This was a sweet poem u wrote 4 ur mom! I bet it brought tears to her eyes when she read it. :)

[A]

Adorable! I think this would make a great mother's day halmark card! :) I love the flow of this piece too. Great poem :)

[clemon73]

beautifully penned. Respect, I like it.

[harman kour]

your mum wud hav been so glad 2 read this!! :))) i wanna write one for my mum tooo... I liked d poem bt mayb it cud hav been better... but anyways it says want u wantd 2 convey very well!!!

[Liverpoolfan]

I definitely like it. Good job.
And, I can see that many others like it as well :P

[Therene]

Hey there! I think this is my first review on any of your works. I'll tell you firsthand that I assess both the content and the technicals of a written piece. :D

For content, I find it wonderful that your mom is your inspiration. I may not have the best relationship with my mom but I cannot agree more of what is written here.Our mothers were blessed with so many things: a keen mind, a strong will, a loving heart, and gentle hands. Our mothers are technically the superheroes of our lives. For technicals, I commend you for flow for it is so natural. I found it quite disappointing though that your rhyme scheme faltered at the end. I loved it from from line 1 to line 16. If you'd consider my suggestion, place line 17 to the last line in the author's note. The 16 lines stands as inspiration in itself. Another technical nit-pick is that you should break it up; four lines per stanza. Final nitpick,
"You gave me name"
-turn it to 'you gave me a name' so it would compliment the meter in the next line.

Overall, this is one great write! Keep writing. :)

[deeps]

This is amazing, i enjoyed this write