Joy

My first Tanka. I just saw it in my files. I wrote this when I was second year high. :) Hope you like it. :)

Let joy be in you.

It's end to all misery.

Live long and laugh loud,

Lives without joy cause much pain.

Bring joy for those who you love!

Author's Note

As you noticed, it's really short and made up of only five lines. It is a TANKA. :)

Reviews

[Dev]

nice write :)

[Simple_mee]

Short and sweet! A beautiful meassage !! A great TANKA ;))

[alison13]

this is a good tanka. very inspirational. keep up the good work. :)