Joy

My first Tanka. I just saw it in my files. I wrote this when I was second year high. :) Hope you like it. :)

Let joy be in you.

It's end to all misery.

Live long and laugh loud,

Lives without joy cause much pain.

Bring joy for those who you love!

Author's Note

As you noticed, it's really short and made up of only five lines. It is a TANKA. :)

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like this poem. It is cute and nice. :)

[Abhinav]

whats a TANKA?
nice, sweet poem......

[JENY]

Yes good.
Joy ....
Man's ultimate aim of living is .....
To find out eternal source of joy....
Do you agree with it?

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

nice and short. Shows off just the important things about anything you couldve written to add on to it. Its very down to business and sweet. Good job

[rielovella]

Nice! Short but very beautiful.

[deeps]

Wonderful Tanka! I found this quite the inspiring write really! There is a lesson in this write. So very well written.

[freaknkamikaze]

wonderful. i love it. keep up the great work!

-lonikay

[Liverpoolfan]

Very good.

[harman kour]

A wonderful message in these beautiful lines... It feel the same
Laugh out loud and Love!!

[jhed]

what can I say..Wow..this is amazing though short..