Empty Room

About school. :D

As school year ends,
I'm starting to miss this room.
Empty lockers.
Closed door.
Windows locked.
No added notes.
No teachers to listen to.
I will be missing all of these.
As I walk along the corridor,
It's impossible for me not to see
This empty room that was once filled
Filled with memories,
Laughter,
Heartaches,
Dramas,
Misunderstandings.

Someday...
I will fill this room with things I love.
Fill this room with my yesterday.

Author's Note

Again, comments would be very much appreciated. thanks in advance. :)
sorry if it's too short. it just came out from my mind.

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

Maryjane this is an excellent peice.....it brings out your conscioussness of things that may be quite ordinary to others.......yet very important to those who are conscious...congratualtions...The shortness is perfect........its the message..the meaning..the energy..the images and emotions that are captured.......congrats!

[Holly-Marie]

I liked this. It's unusual to see a poem where school is talked about in a positive light, it made a nice change =)
It was so easy to picture everything you were saying perfectly. Really well written =)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Aww I like it. :)

[Abhinav]

i loved my school, and was heartbroken too when i had to leave it suddenly
and this poem was like a mirror, reflecting my deepest emotions and feelings.
yeah, i don't think its that short either, its just direct and straight to the point
awesome write, and i hope to read more from you:)))

[jhed]

so sweet of you to bring back memories of the past..I miss you guys too though we still see each other at school,you know for the dance rehearsals...it insults me though,...see yah on Monday!!! Oh, and reviews for me would be very much appreciated..haha.. take care!! :3

[Simple_mee]

So sweet !! School time is the very best time of our life, We are carefree yet always under constant guidance.
U have done a great job with the words. ;)

[harman kour]

its a sweet poem... School life is definitely the most cherishing part of ones life and parting with it can be very difficult!
(though i am still a schoolgirl n wish to be one forever... OOps!!! thats not possible!!!)
Enjoyed reading it.. :)

[Dev]

Laughter,
Heartaches,
Dramas,
Misunderstandings.

haha.. tell me about it !! :D I know !! School's such a place that when you're in it , you're like get me outta here and when you're out, you're lik WHA I wanna go back !! :) nice read !

[alison13]

this is a good writing. just reading it, i'm already missing the moments we had inside that room. good job. :)