Empty Room

About school. :D

As school year ends,
I'm starting to miss this room.
Empty lockers.
Closed door.
Windows locked.
No added notes.
No teachers to listen to.
I will be missing all of these.
As I walk along the corridor,
It's impossible for me not to see
This empty room that was once filled
Filled with memories,
Laughter,
Heartaches,
Dramas,
Misunderstandings.

Someday...
I will fill this room with things I love.
Fill this room with my yesterday.

Author's Note

Again, comments would be very much appreciated. thanks in advance. :)
sorry if it's too short. it just came out from my mind.

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

I like how you fit in everything that happens when school is out.
Excellent write.

[JessicaRenee]

I love this poem! It flows really well, and while reading it, I could picture everything as if I were there.

[JENY]

Good……..
Nice reading……..
But I will say…..fill the rooms…
With hopes for tomorrow…
Is that better…….

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Child, you write like an old soul. I will be looking for your name on the lists of authors on Amazon.

[Coyote Poetry]

You write with wisdom. Poem is beautiful. I drove by my old school and the past come back to me. A very good poem with a very good story and description that was very good.
Coyote

[Daydreamer54]

Wow this kinda reminds me of how it must feel to graduate from highschool. ur happy about it, but you'll miss the memories of being in school. Great poem! :)

[Tina Kline]

Sometimes we don't realize or don't think we're going to miss something until after its gone. You did a really good job on this, I really like it. Short poems are just as good as long ones.

[Knackers]

great... Brings back the good memories of school.. it was sad to leave but also god as you were starting the rest of your life...

[Shreya]

remarkable............here written above are the things ill remember all my life

[Crowley]

Its not important how long it is, just that you get your point and the feelings you wanted to express to others who can identify. I think we can all identify with this one. You do a nice job of jogging the memory of anyone leaving school for the summer or for good. Great job.