Everythings going to be Fine

i lay in bed in bed next to you,

 

our legs entangled,

 

our hearts combined.

 

i look you and a smile appears.

 

no words are spoke but our thoughts are loud,

 

you stare so bodly into my eyes,

 

seeing my past you hold me close,

 

whispering in my ear those words i've been longing to hear.

 

i lay my head on your chest, im falling a sleep

 

we're at our best.

Author's Note

he whispers the title
haha

Reviews

[John Stussy]

Well done romantic poem. The tenderness of the moment was well captured.

[maryann]

if two people are in love they shouldnt have to say it to each other. just knowing is all you need.

[lou]

wow.. ur free verses are awesome!

[Wunderlich]

This is well written, and not to come off as mean or anything, the concept nothing too new. However, you definitely have potential. I'm heading over to check the rest of your stuff :D