murder

A dark, forbidding and stormy night

Angry bitter and out of sight

Time goes by you wait and wait

She never came

Shes far to late

Raining, raining on your head

When will she show

I'd rather be dead then wait

Angry bitter and out of sight

Reviews

[Wunderlich]

Hah, very angry and bitter indeed. This isn't too bad; it definitely gets the emotion across. A few spelling corrections though (only because I see this mistake so much):

"I'd rather be dead THEN wait" should be "I'd rather be dead THAN wait". "Than" is used for comparisons, "then" is used in reference to time.