To my Friend

Dedicted to my friends Kloud Clove & Lois

To my Friend

I called you at the mid of the night

It broke your sleep yet you attended me at that sight.

 

I narrated you the entire history

You gave it a ear patiently

 

I was shattered into pieces

You collected me to make me head strong

 

For 100 times I told you my concerns

You gave me 101 solutions

 

The world seems so small

When you were around

 

Now that you are preoccupied

What is “Space” I understand

 

Only a gentle promise my dear friend

I will not weep like before till the end

 

I just don’t want your efforts to be in vain

 Even if I or if I do not overcome the pain. 

 

Author's Note

We are very fortunate if we have a genuine friend around. My way of expressing gratitude towards them.

Reviews

[Cassie]

A very good poem to your friend, This reminds me so much of me, the friend who was there for me when I felt like my whole world had crushed. Thank you once again for your beautiful pieces, they are worth reading a hundred times. Good job Mary. I will shelve this in my library

[Mary Christabel George]

You are too a friend for whom one can feel so.......:)
It feels so great when our work is liked to this extent.
Thank you so much dearest........!

[Cassie]

Its good work Mary and it was my pleasure reading it. You should always appreciate the good in others.

[Mary Christabel George]

Yes indeed....:)

[Deuces]

I completely agree. It's hard to keep those that are a real and true friends around. This piece was penned well and written straight from the heart. Enjoyed it!

[Mary Christabel George]

You shape me up with optimism with your generous reviews always.
Thanks a Ton...!

[Siliousneo]

this is an amazing poem, i am there for friends all the time regardless of the circumtances, and i give the best advice i can =)

[Mary Christabel George]

That is so kind of you..
Thanks for the read & Review...:)

[Silhouette]

Aww this is so sweet =) I think we all have a special friend like this (I've been one for a few before) Nice job =)

[Mary Christabel George]

That is cool Sil...
Thank you...!!!!

[Silhouette]

Anytime, dear friend =)

[Mary Christabel George]

:)

[Baby Ricochet]

This is a lovely poem with a nice, tight rhyming pattern. Friends you can really talk to are worth a pharmacy full of drugs and the side effects aren't as bad. Well, some people though, you wonder why in the hell you hang out with them at all. Then they do what they do that makes them shine in your eyes and you think. "Okay, I won't push you out of the car this time." Then there's friends that you wonder how you ever got by in life before you met them. Those are far and few between but you keep them no matter what

[Mary Christabel George]

Absolutely Baby.
That is the world of friends.

[Gaurav Walia]

you are absolutely right..We all need that one friend we can rely on for almost everything...beautifully expressed...Kudos!

[Mary Christabel George]

Oh! Thank you so much Gaurav....!

[Gaurav Walia]

No problem dear...God Bless

[Mary Christabel George]

God Bless u 2 !

[CreativeCookie]

Only one critique: "Even if or if I not overcome the pain." Shouldn't it be: Even if I or if I do not overcome the pain.
Love,
CreativeCookie

[Mary Christabel George]

Oh! yes Thank you for the correction.

[Will]

Very thoughtful and emotional write. I like how you bring some rhyme into the last two stanzas to close it out and give it some resolution. Nice job!

[Mary Christabel George]

Thank you so much Will