Walking a mile

There is a mixture of many things here. Hope one will bifurcate, differentiate & understand them all each.

Walking a mile....!

Walking a mile

Searching for smile

Me & my Solitude

Nature gifted me with gratitude.

 

Returning to a home...

Which existed never.

Loving a mother...

Who never loved in return.

Love so profound & chaste...

Seen only in dreams & fairy tale.

 

Walking a mile

Searching for smile

Me & my Solitude

Nature gifted me with gratitude.

 

Lost in the crowd...

Yet very lonely.

Solace arrived gracefully...

Mind haunted with thoughts.

It’s raining out there ...

Regret not getting wet.

 

 

Walking a mile

Searching for smile

Me & my Solitude

Nature gifted me with gratitude.

 

Looked into the mirror...

To see the broken reflection of self.

These barren lands...

Haven’t seen flood for long.

Smiling & laughing now...

Over the tears & pain survived ever.

 

Walking a mile

Searching for smile

Me & my Solitude

Nature gifted me with gratitude.

Mary Christabel George.......!

 

Author's Note

Some find it hopeless yet i find some hope in it.
Reviews plz...

Reviews

[Deuces]

Wow, Mary. Powerful and profound piece. I think anyone who has at one point or another felt like they were taken for granted in some way or another or dealt a bad hand can relate. I enjoyed this and also enjoyed the chorus and italics every two paragraph. Send me some requests - would love to read more.

[Mary Christabel George]

Thanks for enjoying the read. I am glad to know that you can relate to this poem. Yes will send you some read requests. You can see some of my work...:)

[James Helm]

This poem is really good. You have inspired me to write about something!

[Mary Christabel George]

Wow! I feel privileged that "Walking a mile" inspired you to write.
Thank you James.

[1 Deep]

Nice write and easy to understand. It's good to have gratitude even in hard times.

[Mary Christabel George]

Thank you for liking the simplicity of it Deep...:)

[CreativeCookie]

It's not filled with hopelessness for me, the person "speaking" is just telling you how it is thus far. Then they go on to tell you what they're doing about it.
"Walking a mil
Searching for smile
Me & my Solitude
Nature gifted me with gratitude"
To me, she's also saying she won't give up, that she's willing to bear it if she must.
Love,
CreativeCookie

[Mary Christabel George]

I find your review filled with lot of Hope :-)
Yes, she wont give up.
Specially the last stanza the message of hope is conveyed.
Thank you creative cookie.