The Treasure

It was a wet and cool grey day

We were looking and looking

Along the driveway,

One of us checking either side

 

Then we looked in the shed

It wasn't in there either.

Mom said if we looked carefull we would find it.

So we checked these areas again and again

 

Awe, where can it be? Its not under the porch

Nor is it around the well.

How come it is hard to find.

What was the secret to searching Gandpa told us

 

I remember,look closely and it will come to you

We nestle down and look carefully at the lawn

Then under the vines we find the treasure.

Our joy overwhelming as we find it

 

I put it into my left hand top pocket

And  ran thru the vineyard...........

Reviews

[angelinmypocket]

Mary...you've written a mystery here sweetie...what treasure could possibly be small enough to hide under a grape vine...except Mary's answer to this question...LOL. That's what's missing Mary...the answer to the question...what was it? Great write...very entertaining Dear.
Love/Liz/angelinmypocket

[Ray Hamilton]

Well I'm glad you found it, what was it?
The wonders of youth many treasures we have found over the years
Some will always stay priceless others not so much
A very enjoyable piece you have written
Thank you
Ray

[angelina neves]

:) lovely! It could only be there!!

[Helena]

Now Mary, you just can't keep us hanging like that!! LOL

Yes, what was the treasure??

Loved where you muse took you with the phrase. Thank you
for joining Tony's contest and of course for "Keeping the Dream Alive"!

Helena :)

[Suelou]

Wow! This is great.

[doreen cyr]

so what was the treasure sis lol
great write
doreen