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The day is grey and cool

I begin the walk  at dawn

The drizzle  makes me think Fool

 

Shivering I stifle a yawn

The grey of the city streets

Lightening in the dawn

 

Smiling at those I meet

I spy the new blossoms colour

As the buds explode it's treat

 

The forms are full of colours

The reds, greens, pinks, whites a delight

All wrapped in their pallors

 

Their mariad of colours a delight

The variety of forms and shapes exquisite

Dim the grey day in my sight

 

The rain filling their appetite

So the  new may bloom

Colour our world with insite

Reviews

[Michael X]

this is beautifully conveyed marry, your words paint an elegant picture of light, the images are
sweeping and set the imagination in flight, i love the opening stanza, to think of grey city streats,
metaphysically percieved in light of the context, to visualize the rain create reneweled freshness,
very invigarating, accentuating the scenery with blossoms, i am sure most hearts would find the
entire poem beautiful and a dream, as in being a peaceful place for thoughts to dwell, this will
have to go in my favorites, gently passionate work, thanks for sharing, loved it, can't to reading more of you

[Helena]

Beautiful and so vivid in imagery. A sheer delight to read Mary. Good work! ~ Helena

[Angelic Darkness]

I love the rich visual, and the creative way you expressed your words.
Your colors are deep, vibrant, and full of life. However you used grey in
the first stanza and the fifth. I just have a pet peave about repeating words.
These are the lines I really liked: I begin the walk at dawn

The drizzle makes me think Fool
I spy the new blossoms colour

As the buds explode it's treat

The rain filling their appetite

Amazing words. Keep up the good work:)