Break the silence

Break the silence

Smash it while it's 

weak

quite quiet it's been

since the fire burned my entire...ty

don't you dare lie to me

it's only fare don't you see 

that we stop it at three

we had a thing for some time

but time's and old b*****d

see he kept going faster

now i can't see past ya

toy with me do you think you will

give it time and i think you'll feel 

like HD it's just too real

head's a record spinning wheel

sanity thinning 

I'm not winning

evil grinning

i'm the first one to be admitting

you jumped in and when you snuk out 

I lucked out

you left feeling feeble freezing now i'm fully frosty

and i have to start back from where you shot me

running through a maze turning corners where you lost me

lost me lost me lost me

my mumbles now jumbled 

jungle gym giant

crushed by a tyrant

in a struggle so violent

he kept trying

save himself from dying

alone now he's flying

no one can hear him crying 

except for that time when 

he thought he was alright

but that right 

turned to left 

when she left

and stepped to the right giving him a fright

now he's uptight 

starts to think that he might 

do something to spite

he's right back where he was before

breathing is a chore 

he's hurt to his core

scars split so sore

one time more

turns it into four...

Author's Note

i wrote this a while ago let me know what you think, as with my other post please don't hold back i would to hear what you have to say, preferably things about the word choices and rhyme structure.