children of light

All of us..

growing alone
in a familiar place
dancing under the moon
and sleeping with the sand
body temperature rising;
to you, 
my sun. 
my ruler,
I plead, I beg of you
reveal the road
I shall follow
for I am nothing 
but a daughter of earth
my tears pour with the rain;
I revolt aside the lightning
your words swarm inside
and emit through my fingertips
born to surrender
to you,
my sun 

Reviews

[Mazie Tackett]

ok very good

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

"for I am nothing

but a daughter of earth

my tears pour with the rain;

I revolt aside the lightning"

I loved this part of your poem. This was a good read thank you for it.