Cuts

when i found you,
the pieces of your heart
were scattered on the floor.

as i started to pick them up,
pieces of mine were cut 
and fell in your place.

soon, i was picking up
my own pieces
and you had already 
walked away.

Reviews

[Miss Sharon]

Excellent write my dear. The closing stanza sadly represents the way too many relationships end....with someone picking up the pieces of their heart and wondering what happened. Well done! ~Sharon

[Marta Rampini]

Thanks Sharon!

[Miss Sharon]

You are quite welcome! ~Sharon