Why you ?

poem made up when i was bored at 11 at night :L

Why you couldn't it be easy.

But you making me feel queasy.

Why your beauty really does please me.

But you never seem to notice me.

Why I can't stop thinking of you.

But I never seem to get you.

Why are the tears of my face.

But is this all you see me as a disgrace.

 

Am i love sick?

Or just hopless ?

 

 

Reviews

[marshyman]

sorry should of been why you, couldn't it be easy

[[KL]]

Very interesting Jake. I have to say, this is rather a good write.
There are a few errors though, I think.
The first line for instance..?
But apart from that and the space between the last word and the question mark..
Very good indeed.. Well done (: