I love every moment

I love every moment

A Poem by marshyman

I love every moment,

I hate every tear.

I’m only happy,

When your here.

 

You’re my star,

 In the night sky.

You’re my reason,

 That I try.

After everything I go through.

After every bridge I cross.

If at the end you’re in my arms.

Then it will worth the loss.

 

After everyone I’ve lost.  

After every tear I cry.

I wish for one last time,

 To see the beauty of your eye.

© 2010 marshyman


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I love the rhyming, the way you use full stops is very effective. Lovely poem...

Posted 14 Years Ago


i like the rhyming :).
good work jake :D x

Posted 14 Years Ago


its good :) but one thing doesn't make sense to me "To see the beauty of your eye." = ?

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good use of rhyme here, a good write =D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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