New day

New day

A Poem by marshyman

A new day is coming,
above the hills i see.

A new song im humming,
for all the world and me.

 

 

A new  love is growing,

between me and you .

A new pain is living,

when you say we're through.

© 2010 marshyman


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short but sweet!

Posted 14 Years Ago


write more you fewl ;) this is good

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ouch.. Harsh ending there.. Good nonetheless :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it! The end is unexpected...beautiful...

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 16, 2010
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