A Solitary Rendezvouz

A Solitary Rendezvouz

A Poem by Marshal Gebbie


A Solitary Rendezvous.

 




























When she walks past in her loveliness

Do your nostrils twitch and flare ?

Do your senses swell with passion

When you see her standing there ?

Are  you proud to walk beside her ?

Do you feel you're standing tall ?

Are there any compromises,

Is there any doubt at all ?

Is there joy in your tomorrows,

Do your expectations soar ?

Does she make you feel exalted,

Do you float above the floor ?

Is there magic in the very air

You breathe into your chest ?

Are your achievements exceeding

Your considered, very best ?

Do you love her and want her

And worship her smile ?

Would you sacrifice all

To be acknowledged for a while ?

 

Marshalg

@theBach

12 August 2009

 

 

© 2011 Marshal Gebbie


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That's so sweet! You're just an old romantic, ain't'cha ;)




BTW, on the 7th to last sentence, you put "breath" and I think you meant "breathe"

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Marshal Gebbie
Marshal Gebbie

Auckland, New Zealand



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Poem writer for the average Joe. Take tremendous satisfaction in creatively writing about everyday things and everyday people. Australian native who has adopted New Zealand and New Zealanders. Marvel.. more..

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