Terminate with Prejudice, The word came from on high, Synchronise the satellite Above her in the sky. Instruct the drone manoeuvres To glide 10,000 feet And fire the micro missile Through the roof, but be discreet!
A haze of gas like perfume, A sneezing fit or two And every living thing within The building dies on cue. No symptoms are detected, No evidence is found, Because the toxins are oxidised Before the hour comes round.
She lies in all her beauty, Clear alabaster skin, Green eyes stare to infinity No heart, that beats, within. Her searching words offended The holders of the grail, Who reached across the globe To inflict their deadly flail.
This Brave, New, evil World With technology to do The bidding of the acolytes Who transgress borders through, Of every creed and every man, Across the planet vast To violate, at will, Good human values of the past.
Marshalg Revelations in a Scorching Sauna 26/11/2011
Your way of incorporating the unconscionable technologies with which war is these days waged, into a poem which is simultaneously angry, and sad, and beautiful, and pleading is quite unique. Do I sense a devotedly spiritual man who was compelled by national ardor to do things he later came to loathe?
And if that weren't enough, the masterful manner with which your missive is woven into a sorrowful song is a delight to read, and to ruminate over.
Your way of incorporating the unconscionable technologies with which war is these days waged, into a poem which is simultaneously angry, and sad, and beautiful, and pleading is quite unique. Do I sense a devotedly spiritual man who was compelled by national ardor to do things he later came to loathe?
And if that weren't enough, the masterful manner with which your missive is woven into a sorrowful song is a delight to read, and to ruminate over.
Poem writer for the average Joe. Take tremendous satisfaction in creatively writing about everyday things and everyday people.
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