Remember this....

Remember this....

A Poem by Marshal Gebbie

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Remember This…..


Dedicated to Jonno… Scholar, adventurer, life long mate.


Remember this when pulses pumped
Adrenalyne ran high,
Remember this when young blood flew
And almost reached the sky,
Remember when you worked like hell
And sleep flew out the door,
We fought and spat like alley cats
Competing for the floor.
Remember how the days flew by
Exhaustion took it’s toll,
We wrote the book and sang the song
And acted out the role.
Remember how you smiled at me
And offered me your hand
Remember how we chased the girls
And sought the promised land.
Amazing how we laboured on
Amazing what we won,
We fabricated wonderment
We almost reached the sun,
From dregs of dust we built the dream
And fashioned love so fair,
A million people stayed with us
A million breathed the air.
Our Buttercup was something great
Our memories impart,
The magic of a lifeline shared
A brotherhood of heart.
 
And so, Old Son, as life goes on
And age doth take its toll,
Remember how that sap once flowed
When you and I were gold.
And friendship forged it’s scarlet grip
Forever more to be
A warming place within our souls
A bond twixt you and me.
 
Marshalg
Mangere Bridge
10 August 2007
  
 

© 2011 Marshal Gebbie


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The poem took me to a good place. Life become better and sweeter with time and old age. To know laughter and have great dreams/no fear of tomorrow are the best days of a life.
"We wrote the book and sang the song
And acted out the role.
Remember how you smiled at me
And offered me your hand"
Thank you for a outstanding poem. Took me back to when I was young and crazy.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Would that we could all mark our time - our existence this way... you did your 'mate' proud. Well said.

Chris

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The poem took me to a good place. Life become better and sweeter with time and old age. To know laughter and have great dreams/no fear of tomorrow are the best days of a life.
"We wrote the book and sang the song
And acted out the role.
Remember how you smiled at me
And offered me your hand"
Thank you for a outstanding poem. Took me back to when I was young and crazy.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Marshal Gebbie
Marshal Gebbie

Auckland, New Zealand



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Poem writer for the average Joe. Take tremendous satisfaction in creatively writing about everyday things and everyday people. Australian native who has adopted New Zealand and New Zealanders. Marvel.. more..

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