why

just because

Why

Why must you

keep me in here

You want me to go

You want to go

You choose

I want to leave

You wont let me

 

He doesnt care

No one does

Only one cares

Cares

About me

Why

Why God must you

Hate me

 

Take her

Take her far away

I want to

curl in a ball

and cry

leave

 

leave me alone

to suffer

Why

must does

this always

happen

to me?

Why

Author's Note

I wrote this in 2 min. when i felt depressed+

Reviews

[Mars Samuel]

I love how it echo`s as in I absolutely love it. It makes it seem, and me feel, as sad as you probably felt and a little bit lonely.
Hope you feel better soon...
Way past cool!

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to feel alone and depress. I like the thoughts in the poem. Sometime it is Okay to want peace and quiet to reorganize the mind and thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Forthegoodandthebadiwil..]

i do think it sounds depressed, and beutiful at the same time..... but think on the bright side..... bueaty doesnt only come in one package! And i meant to spell all beutys wrong

[Leslie Philibert]

Good piece of poetry, what I like the most is the ball verse, there you present your feelings in a visual way that impresses, good write.

[Starr Mist]

This was very well written! I liked it a lot... and if I had my own personal poems book, I would add this one for sure! :)

Great job!

-Starr Mist

[selkietales]

This poem portrayed emotions very well. However, when you said "Why must does this always happen to me?" you should take out either "must" or "does." But good job!

[Mockingbird]

it's the worst feeling to be depressed, feeling despair and abandoned. hopefully this passes soon.

[victoria]

so sad

[eeoopig]

I can tell you felt depressed :( This made me feel sad too. But that means you did a good job of it :)

[♥ Kinnixk]

That little -*this contant has been removed due to violent motions and swearings*- why does she keep doing that to you?

...I like the poem ^.^