why

just because

Why

Why must you

keep me in here

You want me to go

You want to go

You choose

I want to leave

You wont let me

 

He doesnt care

No one does

Only one cares

Cares

About me

Why

Why God must you

Hate me

 

Take her

Take her far away

I want to

curl in a ball

and cry

leave

 

leave me alone

to suffer

Why

must does

this always

happen

to me?

Why

Author's Note

I wrote this in 2 min. when i felt depressed+

Reviews

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Yup, you can write about the most brooding of feelings when depressed. I'd say lovely poem, but it was really sad sooo that wouldn't fit it....hauntingly beautiful! *claps hands together* YEAH! That's genius! Hey, I went to college. Got a degree in poem compliments. XD

[Captain]

Honestly, you can tell that there was somewhat of a haste from the style of writing, but I like it. I think it allows a more in depth, raw view of your emotion. Makes it a little more real. Lovely work.
'Captain

[Sasha]

Our mood can surely inspire us to write stuff we'd never thought possible. Great poem.

[lee von cleef]

Great thing being able to open the flood gates and share . Why because none of us really know what in the hell is going on.Me i usually wrap my hands around a warm cup til the sun goes up or down, usually a lot longer then two min.Stay simple,and play play play...

[The Jay]

Not without its flaws but the flow is really good.

[Alex Vidmar]

beautiful.

[Allie]

I can so relate to this.. I often find myself stuck, wanting to get away. And I often find myself thinking why certain things have to happen to me or the ones I love. I try to remind myself that I am strong enough to handle what comes my way. Stay strong, good writing!

[Shy Girl]

Depressed is one word for this piece. If I could get my emotions out in 2 mins as fast as this...wow!! Relatable poem very much so :)

[Zoe_N.]

well writing poems is really a good way to express your overflowing emotions, particularly when you no one to turn to.. ( Im not saying you have no friends)
but it works --- your poem..

=)

[MandaBear]

absolutely love it.