My loves

This is a poem about my loves and a few hates

Teddys

Home

Ice cream

No humidity

Grass

Summer

 

Maria

Even

Aamigos

No step-parents

 

Together

Once

No liers

Sometimes

 

Together

Once

 

Music is

Everyting

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

Cool . . . I love ice cream too

[Legolas]

Very short but very nice as well. Good job

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the ice cream and warm days/summer. Good to have music also. A very good poem. I don't like liars either. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[The Jay]

How concisely brilliant.

[♥ Kinnixk]

"Music is everything" that is true.
I like it; it's short, sweet, and to the point.

[Richy Moon]

Like the last quote, "Music is everything"
Usally I don't care for no-plot writtings, But i'm liking this one :D

[Whiskurz]

Short but to the point.....I liked it.....Whisk

[Alex Vidmar]

short and sweet. I agree with the last two lines.

[Heromen Selena]

Nice short right. I prefer deep stuff though ;) but it's nice and short I like it.

[dontwakeme]

This made me laugh. Good job :)