Scarred

Scarred

from the constant

pain agony

and anguish

 

People lie to me

makeing the scars deeper

Please tell me the

truth for once

 

Scars from my

broken heart

broken friendships

and lies

 

People have told me

they loved me

I know thats a lie

No one can love me

 

Broken friendships

People just hate me

No one was their

when I locked myself

 

Away

So I can cry in

peace

 

In order to be

accepted

I have to put on a

mask and hide my

 

true self

 

No one was there

for me when

I cried

after my loss

 

Constant lies on why

they avoid me

People just dont

want to be around me

 

People try to

comfort me

but they make it

worse

 

I am scarred

for life

and nothing can

change that

 

I will wear these

marks

 

forever

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

I admire the way you with honesty and poetic quality express your feelings.

[Sami Khalil]

I am scarred

for life

and nothing can

change that
A nice write.

[Patrick Henry]

If it's the only way to get through this stuff without the threat of drugs messing you up or worse, you can always get a tattoo to cover it up when you are older!! *hugz* You really rolled out a whole number of things most of us were afflicted with in younger years when it came to stress, disillusionment, pain/loss of friends/respect, and the constant change of moods and being introduced to the world around us. After the internet, most now are introduced to it a lot faster and with a fury of opinions and neglect that also come with that "pretend" freedom. I love your poems, and still, I feel like I want to hug you after each one of them!! Why not? It fee's freakin' nice to!! : ) xoxo -Mark

[CecilA]

Maria,

I love and appreciate your honesty and how you have expressed it so well in your poem.

Well written. Interesting, isn't it, how we can sum up our life with just a few words.

Thank you for sharing you writing with us.

I appreciate genuine people who don't really need comfort. Rather you need acceptance and the opportunity of expression.

I look forward to reading more of your creative poetry.

Hopefully we can become friends. I would appreciate your comments on my work when you have time.

Keep up the good work.

PS: I believe you are loveable.

Sincerely,

Cecil

[Pax]

sight! i will not confort you for i might make it worst, but i say this... be strong my friend though life is never fair to us, used the the constant pain, agony and anguish to live up a strong life...be wiser because life is even more wiser...
Keep writing those thoughts...

['poetry by bonnie']

I have had 3 best friends through-out my life. I am 56 yrs old. One I had from age 15 until I was 44 yrs old. We had got into a fight, she wrote a letter to the judge in my custidy trial trying to get my kids taken from me. Some of it tru, all exaggerated and some plain lies. I won custidy, did'nt want my best friend. Best friend # 2 We were friends for 23 yrs. She moved up to my state, going to re-settle, I helped her, she stayed with me awhile, then her and my best friend of 8 yrs. slept together and she gave him a choice her or me.. i was a friend/without benfits. Never again did either one ever talk to me.....

[MusicLover]

im sorry :(

[Coyote Poetry]

Few real friends and love will touch rarely. But a life without effort is a life without living. Need to test life and have some fun. One day you will wish you did. A honest and direct poem. Life is fair for the all of us. We need reason and purpose. Just need to find it. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thewse take out the w :)
Good job. Great poem. Nice style