The doctors mistake

The doctors mistake

A Poem by MusicLover
"

A bit late on posting this

"

In the medical

world they have

many ways on how

to treat all kinds

of illness

 

They could

not stop

her from

leaving me

 

Because of

the mistake

i must

suffer

everyday

 

The agony

The pain

engulfing me

doctors cant

stop

 

What

they

started

 

My world

spining

out

of

control

 

No doctor

can find

a cure

for my

illness

 

No one

listins

no one

cares

 

I try to

speak

slapped with the

cold hand

of reality

 

Blocked

out

from

 

family

friends

school

church

home

 

I am an
outcast

 

the pain becomes

too much

I close my

eyes

 

Let the tears

stream down

my cheek

 

I hear

what the

doctor

says

 

One word

"Cancer"

excuses on

why they

can't help

 

"too far along"

"too old"

"not enough money"

 

I grab

my moms

fragile hand

 

start to cry

 

one

month

later

 

Shes

gone

 

5

years

later

 

I

am

gone

 

never get

to

see

my own

mother

 

because

of

the

 

Doctors

mistake

© 2012 MusicLover


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A very sad poem. Hard to lose a mother. Cancer take the best from us. I lost many good people to cancer. Each time it is no easier. I learn to appreciate time with family and friends. Thank you for sharing the sad poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


what a sad poem.
the message is unique.
Cool.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a tragic death bestowed upon the poor victims of cancer. You've made an astounding piece dedicated to those whom brushed cancer, and I am amazed by the sense of longing for a cure you whisper within this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax
i feel you my friend... we seems to have the same situation, touched by cancer's fate of our love one... a deep sadness in your poem...

Just cherish the good memories for you to hold into and be happy in your life...


Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm sorry for your loss cancer is a tragic disease that so many people have lost loved ones to

Posted 12 Years Ago



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