The doctors mistake
A Poem by
MusicLover
A bit late on posting this
In the medical
world they have
many ways on how
to treat all kinds
of illness
They could
not stop
her from
leaving me
Because of
the mistake
i must
suffer
everyday
The agony
The pain
engulfing me
doctors cant
stop
What
they
started
My world
spining
out
of
control
No doctor
can find
a cure
for my
illness
No one
listins
no one
cares
I try to
speak
slapped with the
cold hand
of reality
Blocked
out
from
family
friends
school
church
home
I am an outcast
the pain becomes
too much
I close my
eyes
Let the tears
stream down
my cheek
I hear
what the
doctor
says
One word
"Cancer"
excuses on
why they
can't help
"too far along"
"too old"
"not enough money"
I grab
my moms
fragile hand
start to cry
one
month
later
Shes
gone
5
years
later
I
am
gone
never get
to
see
my own
mother
because
of
the
Doctors
mistake
© 2012 MusicLover
Reviews
A very sad poem. Hard to lose a mother. Cancer take the best from us. I lost many good people to cancer. Each time it is no easier. I learn to appreciate time with family and friends. Thank you for sharing the sad poetry.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
what a sad poem.
the message is unique.
Cool.
Posted 12 Years Ago
what a sad poem.
the message is unique.
Cool.
Such a tragic death bestowed upon the poor victims of cancer. You've made an astounding piece dedicated to those whom brushed cancer, and I am amazed by the sense of longing for a cure you whisper within this poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Such a tragic death bestowed upon the poor victims of cancer. You've made an astounding piece dedicated to those whom brushed cancer, and I am amazed by the sense of longing for a cure you whisper within this poem.
i feel you my friend... we seems to have the same situation, touched by cancer's fate of our love one... a deep sadness in your poem...
Just cherish the good memories for you to hold into and be happy in your life...
Posted 12 Years Ago
i feel you my friend... we seems to have the same situation, touched by cancer's fate of our love one... a deep sadness in your poem...
Just cherish the good memories for you to hold into and be happy in your life...
I'm sorry for your loss cancer is a tragic disease that so many people have lost loved ones to
Posted 12 Years Ago
I'm sorry for your loss cancer is a tragic disease that so many people have lost loved ones to
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Added on November 3, 2012
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