moomy i miss you

I live in

a dark cave

ever since

you left me

 

I was only

11 when

you slipped

away

 

I blamed

myself for

you leaving

and not

coming

back

 

I can never

visit you

daddy wont take me

to see you

 

I want to

give you flowers

and see you smile

 

Mommy

I

miss

you

 

10/3/07

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

This poem, renders me speechless. I always wondered what my mom was like. She died giving birth to me. I can assure you though any time you wanna visit your mom, you don't have to look any further than your heart. Take your hand place it on your heart. Feel your heart beating, and no as long as it beats, She is there with you. Loving you, cuddling you, and i bet she is proud of her little girl, and i know she loves your writing, and you. If It means anything, I am proud and love you and your writing too. Lovely poem my friend!

[Patrick Henry]

*Hugs* My heart goes out to such the loss I have felt maybe 110 times over by now. It doesn't get easier. It gets mundane, the rhythm of what comes after in the mourning process. I read your other poems, and then I reach this one, and little shards break off from my heart wanting to do something to console you in some way!! Great poem; great tribute!! Beautiful Maria. xoxo -Mark

[Sourodip]

This is i guess very personal.....I know how it feels to miss someone who is not with us anymore..... just want to say one thing about he poem....touching
And don't worry I am sure your mothers love is always with you although she may not be physically with you anymore.....No worry, Cheer up mate...:)

[♥ Kinnixk]

Your father won't even take you to her grave???? What?? :O

[MusicLover]

it hurts him too much. to tell you the truth i think my dad cheated

[♥ Kinnixk]

You both need to go to her grave. Otherwise you guys will still feel horrible. (I'm soon to know the feeling :[ I'm not looking forward to it at all.)