Teardrop Falls

A poem for those who have been heart-broken. Being a shoulder to cry on makes me realise that we can't always hold heads up high and things happen for some reasons.

Tears are falling when I'm with you
I feel the pain when I hear you
I feel the thunder keeps coming through
And I feel the whirlwind when I see you

Tears are rolling down from my eyes
When I think you'd die I feel alive
Whenever I go I can see your smile
Whatever I do I can never be fine

Tears are drowning myself inside
It hurts me deeply to stay and cry
It breaks my heart as I'm falling apart
But it burns me in and out to say goodbye

Reviews

[Marquise de Ville]

thanks for the reviews.
well yes, it was painful but the experience inspired my writing =)

[Dekadin]

that sounds like a terrible situation. I like how discriptive this poem is, and it is short yet powerful. very good!!

[The Devil's Own B***h]

This is a stunning piece!!!! Had me so close to tears!!!! Beautiful!

Great job!

Josie

[Aly]

Wow.
I love this poem!
Very expressive!