Just Wishing...

I wish she would notice
my outstretched arms
are merely not just for hugs

I wish she would notice
all the dirty work I do for her
is just sweep under the rug

I wish she would look at me
with erotic intentions
like she looks at him

I wish she would read between
the lines of my notes
But maybe my lines are too thin

I wish our paths wouldn't cross
so much, then maybe I wouldn't
wish so damn much

I wish I could be her one
I wish she could be my one
I wish we could be one

Oh, well...

I was just wishing....

Reviews

[Walkingblind]

Sometimes we women think that men don't understand our
wants or how we feel toward a certain man. This shows that we've both
very emotion but show it different ways. I like this poem because it
lets us feel a man's longing.

Good Job! once again

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

I think this is cute...I like the fact that your character is showing all of these emotions that he feels are so obvious yet the girl does not see them or maybe just ignores them..I like that your character tries to let her realize it without actually telling her...this is a hard situation that i think alot of other people can relate to..i know i can there has been times when i liked a guy so much and the more i tried to tell him my feelings the more he seemed to just think i was a great friend..it hurt when he'd tell me of another girl that he liked and that he wanted my approval..I enjoyed the read...

Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s