This poem encourages taking action and pursuing one's goals, even in the face of challenges and mistakes. The speaker emphasizes the importance of perseverance and learning from past failures, and encourages the reader to be proactive and take steps towards achieving their dreams. The poem also plays with the idea of language and grammar, using the metaphor of verbs and nouns to suggest that action is more important than mere existence.
This poem encourages taking action and pursuing one's goals, even in the face of challenges and mistakes. The speaker emphasizes the importance of perseverance and learning from past failures, and encourages the reader to be proactive and take steps towards achieving their dreams. The poem also plays with the idea of language and grammar, using the metaphor of verbs and nouns to suggest that action is more important than mere existence.
Strong message, I can't ay I'm very fund of it's style unfortunately. However I'm experimental myself...it has a very witty personality.
Cheers!
Apologies for just reading it as well, it's along story, but I have not been on writers cafe as often as I used to be. You are one of 600 plus read requests I have to go through lol.
Fabulous piece of work!
Solid message and very well written,
creative but also uplifting and true,
going to favorites, thanks for sharing
and b-blessed!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you so much!!! That's means alot! Especially I make it to someone's favorites!
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