Waking up

Waking up

A Story by Marley Derailed
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A one line story!

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She woke up in the middle of the night, feeling someone choking her.

© 2017 Marley Derailed


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Marley Derailed
My first attempt at one line stories.

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its good, maybe use like two lines next time n then 3 the time after then carry on adding one extra line each time

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marley Derailed

7 Years Ago

Thanks! I like your suggestion :)
I will leave you a one line review :)

It was a good one

Posted 7 Years Ago


Marley Derailed

7 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Marley Derailed
Marley Derailed

Australia



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Hi, my name's Marley and here's a little about me: I love to write! I write everything from poetry to scripts and novels I just need a little support to become more motivated! I hope you enjoy what .. more..

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