Constance

Something that I did a little ways back...

 

Constance

 

To me, you are more than beautiful

You are balance

The perfection of dreams

The prophet of thoughts

My muse in darkness

I often silently watch your every move

Contemplating thoughts of desire

Subtle hints of lust

The projections from deep within your bounds

Craving your touch

Plotting my next move

Our next encounter

Like the Marquis, I long to take pleasure in you

To pleasure you

Regardless of the forbidden pain it may inflict

The deeds I imagine

Only pale in comparison to your beauty

To life

An existence we already share

Felt in the bond deep inside our souls

Our hearts

Come to me Constance

Consummate our secrets

Prey on my hunger

Hold me close, I am waiting for you

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

The last line is a great way to end it.

I love how you started the descriptors with "balance" - what a wonderful way to describe someone. I love it. It made me think -it was a poem in itself.

"Plotting my next moveOur next encounter"

I love - the plot of it. It's so true.

great job, mydear

hugs

[Aaron M. Anderson]

Powerful and dark. The uses of the words "Constance" and "balance" seems to indicate that this is not only a poem about a woman or a Muse. It's overall very confessional and revealing of a human heart in need, and you effectively keep up the tension until the last line.

Thanks for sharing!

[Anne Hill]

I have read a lot of deep, saddening, and memorable poems. This was all that with a toss of sex appeal. Loved it.

[Michael X]

yes, that is your muse, seems like your soul is touched by a Goddess, she controls your pen, the entire scope of vision is a mindscape into journey, as about astrally devised, the meaning is timeless, this
is touching, to ponder balance, the perfect state between dreams and beauty reading this, one is
completely transported, i could quote many favorite lines, your work is brilliant. keep it up.

[Brenda Sue]

So lovely and romantic. I love it. Wonderfully written. Great job.