plays her song on my roof

another rain storm plays her song on my roof
singing sweetly of summers end
tapping out heartstrings song such a peaceful way
the grey looks so dreamscape against the trees
the bears of her heart come to hug me
as her song wraps round my mind
dance a quick step son
try to get your feet wet
cause it'll be snow soon so lets love the rain while we can
lets find the adventure in the puddles
lets find castles in the fallen leaves
lets roll and play in summers still sweet grass
living is now and its so fine
living is the heart found joy
the soul found freedom in smiles
come on lets go runnin in the puddles
lets get our feet wet
lets smile and be the worlds sun till the sun comes round again

Reviews

[Hunter B]

I like the idea behind it, but some of the lines are rather long, a lot of different things are thrown in there that appears to be a bit jumbled, and some of the phrases don't flow. Once again, I love the idea!!!