perfections phrase (haiku-type-thingamagig)

my heart thirsts to speak poems shouted from rooftops in the pouring rain
my heart longs to run wildly free with a song of loves strength in my veins
my heart burns to write perfections phrase
and give it as a gift to her sweet name

Reviews

[Tonya Moore]

I think this would be more lovely if it were less wordy... more strictly haiku-like, if that makes sense.