Drank deep in paradise

 

You exposed your beauty and my heart

It drank deep in paradise

And my heart it beat thrice a second…

Unto look deep in your eyes.

 

Under the hood of a streetlamp in the moonlight

I was lost for words

There wasn’t a songbird to be seen

But that’s all I heard.

 

So I guess I found me an angel that day,

And a heaven that night

I’ll tell you here and now it came to stay.

And I was blown away… like a kite.

 

But she held the string, and-roll-it-over

Over-and-over in a cloud

And then we both jumped off the jetty,

Honestly, stark-naked eternally avowed.

And, much, more than eternally wowed…

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

What gorgeous romantic images in this one, Mark. Yes, you found an angel, no doubt about it. Good simile and metaphor too. Lydi**

[Mark Heathcote]

I’m glad you liked it ((Lydi)) after the depressive one you read. :) x

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Well, that says a lot about a relationship and how it felt. I love the picture!

[Mark Heathcote]

Lol, thanks for visiting Josie and great review. :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

YOU ARE WELCOME!