A near-forgot memory, of an image of a circular rainbow, refracted off a shard of glass or a warped beam, prompted this overdue recollection. Read, and consider...
I had just sat down to breakfast, and was watching Katie Couric mender through the news on the Today show, when a sheaf of paper was thrust in front of her, and the news then and 37 minutes later changed the world. Where were you?
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What a powerful plea and prayer... you stir memories and hearts, and draw us to triumph even in the midst of such pain. Thank you for sharing words that breathe hope into days so filled with despair and overwhelming thoughts of suffering... we need such hope every day.
Fortunately, we Americans are not used to such horrors on our own soil, so that awful day impacted us especially hard. Now there are two events in American history that will live in infamy. Hopefully, there will be no more.
Your poem well captures our shock and confusion of that day.
Very impressive, Mark. Though I am not an American, I'm sure that my reaction of shock/horror was repeated across the world in millions of homes, by those who wished no harm to America. All I can say is that their god is not my god, and I'm sure that they have since discovered that he is not their god either. As far as your heartfelt plea in the final verse, however, that 'Love may soon usurp your hearts' - I think that's one hope too many in that long dark journey into night.
Wow, breathtaking and heartfelt and the question why, all rolled into it. Beautifully woven into perfection!! This is a brilliant write!! God Bless America!! and God be with those family and friends who were lost!!!
A brilliant exhortation which asserts the resolve and determination we clutch as a nation. The metaphor is nothing short of spectacular. The power of the first stanza was revealed by the completion of the second. A timely and provocative piece Mark. I am proud to have read it...
Todd
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