A near-forgot memory, of an image of a circular rainbow, refracted off a shard of glass or a warped beam, prompted this overdue recollection. Read, and consider...
I had just sat down to breakfast, and was watching Katie Couric mender through the news on the Today show, when a sheaf of paper was thrust in front of her, and the news then and 37 minutes later changed the world. Where were you?
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That I believe will always be the question. Nicely done.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you, Jack. It was an horrific day for all, and we can but pray that sometime in the remote fut.. read moreThank you, Jack. It was an horrific day for all, and we can but pray that sometime in the remote future, SOMEthing of good might be realized from it. Did you perceive the central image, that of a rumpled steel hand, reaching up from the Earth, with a refraction-rainbow (perhaps from a shard of glass) suggesting a ring?
11 Years Ago
yes, unfortunately I could picture it all. It is one of those mind pictures I'd like to someday be a.. read moreyes, unfortunately I could picture it all. It is one of those mind pictures I'd like to someday be able to forget.
Hi, Mark, I was at home making the bed and taking care of the dog when my cousin in Detroit called. He said I should turn on the TV because a terrible tragedy was happening at that time. I will never be quite the same, as many feel.
This is the most beautiful and emotional poem I've ever read about that terrible day. You have summed up the nation's feelings as close to perfectly as one can get, since I don't believe a word for that feeling truly exists. It's important that people keep writing about 9/11, so we never forget.
A well written emotional piece about an emotional day. Well done, Mark.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thank you, Michael. It was an horrid day, one which we may one day forgive, but cannot ever forget.
12 Years Ago
Mark, your poem is so expressive of the searing pain you felt and still feel over those dastardly ac.. read moreMark, your poem is so expressive of the searing pain you felt and still feel over those dastardly acts. You manage to capture so much in one short poem. ~el
A beautiful, and utterly fantastic write! For me this was the life changing event of our generation. As shocking as when Kennedy was shot! I think I cried and was depressed for weeks. I remember waking up my husband, showing him the TV.........I asked, "is this for real?" 100/100
Powerful poem Mark...I do not think we have been given all the facts of 9/11 personally...but such tragic loss of life is always going to touch us :(
Wonderful piece
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