Humiliation

Humiliation

A Story by Mark
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For Chris Cooke's caption contest...

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Humiliation

 

Of humiliations, this is the height, man!

These leotards are awfully tight, man!"

 

   Now you wonder, I'm guessin'

   Why I look like I'm stressin?

 

Dressed up like it was Hallowe'en night, man!

 

   No pup ought to be dressin'

   This is deeply depressin'!

 

Now all I want is to give you a bite, man!

 

 

 

© 2011 Mark


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Boy, did I make a big boo boo in my review - a typo. I meant to say that I stumbled upon yours. I'm embarrassed. Please forgive me.
Jocelynwonders

Posted 12 Years Ago


What a good, funny poem. I'm not usually into poetry, but I stumbled up yours.
Jocelynwonders

Posted 12 Years Ago


My dogs would never let me dress them like this. Even though the strange thoughts have lingerd in my mind " what if I could" love the picture.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hi Mark,

So very cute. Yes, you got the embarrassment. You understand the feeling so well. There's nothing to do. Out of your control. Yet this is so personal. Unfair. Why is the world this way? Did I say, unfair?--yes that sums it up.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love it. Made me laugh, which is always a welcome event. If I was the dog I think I would rather be euthanized than dress up like that. Great picture however.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so cute and made me smile love, much needed lol xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think the expression on that poor pooche's face says it all. He's thinking "Go on, man, just snap my neck. Make it quick and relieve me of this pain!"

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol - I love it! A real mood lifter. I have a weird picture in my mind now!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey way to go with the challenge! I can just see this pup in this outlandish "get-up"!
I wouldn't want to be on the receiving end for that bite...lol

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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