A ROSE IS AROSE

Another foray into my somewhat tongue-in-...e-r-r-r...cheek, pseudo-erotic sribbles. Enjoy!

A ROSE IS AROSE

 

So selfless, the humble clitoris,

So joyous the work she does for us!

   So cleverly hid

   'Neath her labial lid-

So profound, her celestial chorus!

 

In that region, dank though not drear,

She awaits, our approaches to hear.

   Then, when she's persuaded

   Her precinct's invaded,

Her reaction is swift and quite clear!

 

With shudderings and shakings, all tingly

Her territ'ry she's owning quite singly

   Matters not the mode

   Those attentions bestowed:

Whether digital, penile or lingually!

 

Then with wave after persistent wave

She's determined her mistress to save!

   Donning fiery crown

   'Til invader's put down,

(Or at least, runs to hide in the Cave!)

 

At which point, she can somewhat relax, 

From his too-brief, too-frequent attacks.

   And with tremulous shudder,

   her challenge she'll mutter

'Til despised beloved sneaks back.

 

Now, reposing in rapturous chorus

With the Gracious Grail granted just for us,

   That Rose, opened oft,

   Amid cushions so soft!:

The humble (and humbling!) clitoris!

 

 

Mark Teague

c 2010

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Laughingggggggg! Having just read your other post, I'm now dealing with this, so very different in every way! What to say.. umm .. interesting, invigorating, amusing, clever - a subject after my own heart so to speak!

This is what really made me laugh, 'With shudderings and shakings, all tingly ~ Her territ'ry she's owning quite singly ~ Matters not the mode ~ Those attentions bestowed: ~ Whether digital, penile or lingually! '

By the way, the meter's pretty good too

[An owl on the moon]

Well, here is thought worth repeating
Your message so romantically treating
You don't leave us waiting
A master at baiting
This rose is a rose that's worth meeting!

[Samuel Dickens]

Boy, if you could've read this at one of the many Navy beer-busts I used to attend, they'd have named you poet lauriat for sure!

[KAREN]

A new way to describe a rose! beautiful like the poem!!

[Bubo]

Now that is such a way to describe something unique, of sensual beauty and a bold way to move........loved it!

[Through the Gateway]

Amen. :D

A fun little ode, Mark. The style was spot on and the wording was....

...who am I kidding. I just like the subject matter. :D