The Prize

The Prize

A Poem by Mark
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Composed as part of a Reply to a Review of a poem by LisetteCanWrite!, expressing her sorrow at Mankind's selfishness and short-sightedness

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THE PRIZE

No matter how the Prince tries
His goal he'll not ever realize
If his tawdry gifts we'd more despise
And keep our Eyes UPON THE PRIZE!

April 25, 2009

© 2009 Mark


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this was really thought-provoking for just a few lines! I liekd it! good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so true, sometimes we focus on things we shouldn't.
I like this it leaves you with the aspects of what we should focus on.
At least this is what I saw in this write. But who knows how my mind works.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We are made of better substance than we give ourselves credit for, I think. Very thought provoking!

Empress

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww even rhyming your reviews now. lol This is short but to the point. Wise advice in deed.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh yes.........the prize is often hard to hold our focus as there are too many things to take our eyes off the beauty of such a wonderful gift!
It is good to have a reminder of the importance of that which should be the true, and lasting values of life!
Sheila

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mark

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