Upside Down

You made me something I'm not.

Now I'm nothing you ever wanted.

 

I have became the person I was all along.

But, you never opened your eyes to see who I really was.

 

Now you blame my change on others.

When it's really hundred percent me.

 

I hate to cause you this pain,

But now it's time for you to see the real me.

 

I'm done with the fighting,

And all of this crying.

 

I'm not sorry I'm not who you want me to be,

But I am sorry for just now saying all of this.

 

You'll always have a place in my heart,

But all of my respect for you has been lost...

and I'm not sure it can be found.

 

So, now I guess is the time

For me to fix what's been broken-

For so long.

Author's Note

It's not got the poem form...look past that it's kinda just a one stanza it was hard to put in that form so look past that and my punctuation please....

Reviews

[Legolas]

Very nice poem. very heartfelt.
I know you said dont worry about punctuation but I'd like to help so here it is.... sorry if you dont want it...
1. All the i'm's in here, the i should be capitalized.
2. become the* in the second stanza

[Marissa]

thank you and I do appreciate your help thanks!

[Legolas]

You fixed them! Im happy cause alot of people just dont listen when i point mistakes out to them. Thanks! If you have any questions about grammar just shout!

[Marissa]

okay thank you and of course I fixed it... don't want my work being bad cause grammar.

[Legolas]

Your welcome:) well youd be surprised how many people dont listen

[darkness*star1985]

" you made me something i'm not. now i'm nothing you ever wanted" brillant on so many different levels, again another wonderful poem... keep up the wonderful work

[Marissa]

Thank You!