If I could

Please let me know if you need help with an explination....thank you (:

I'd walk out...

And never look back.

 

I'd find my happiness...

That's been lost for so long

 

I'd say thanks...

To God for giving me a life to live.

 

I'd find out all the unknown answers...

To all my crazy questions.

 

But, most of all...

I'd say thanks to all the people who made me who I am today.

Author's Note

ignore the puntuations, an form please i'm still trying to get the hang of that stuff....so please bare with me.

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the last couplet !

[Marissa]

thanks!

[C.]

The topic of this poem is something that took me a really long time to realize. Especially the last stanza. I used to wish that I could go back in time and change the things that happened and change that I met some of the people I did. But, I realize now that without those people in my past, my present would be the same as it is today. And, right now I am really happy with my life. Who knows what would be different if the past didn't play out like it did.

[Marissa]

You know wishing the people who were in your past were never there then you wouldn't be who you are today...the struggles and fears and heartbreaks etc. you've been through made you exactly who you are today. I know that I have struggles right now in my life, but I have amazing people who are still here for me and if I didn't have these struggles I may not of became so close with these people that are for me and I wouldn't trade it for anything not even the struggles being gone because although it's hard I'm gonna get through it...I'm glad your happy with your life now that's great just remember always your past made you the wonderful person you are today (:

[Dr. Wood ?]

THis is pretty good if you want my opinion.

[Marissa]

Of course I want your opinion....thank you! And I'm glad you like it (:

[Aehr]

beautifully done.. hopeful and inspiring... i enjoyed reading this one.

[Celestial Witch Child]

Perfect once again. Inspirational and hopeful. Love it.

[Marissa]

thank you!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

This was real and sincere. Nice job.

[Marissa]

Thank You!

[Coyote Poetry]

"But, most of all...
I'd say thanks to all the people who made me who I am today."
A wise person learn from elders and is thankful. I like the beginning. Good to be confident and prepared for life. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Marissa]

Thank You! And your more than welcome lol.

[Chantel]

I really like this, a really good, honest poem. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Marissa]

Thank You! And your welcome.

[Southern Cross]

What a beautiful read. No frills just truth and I so adore it

[Marissa]

thank you!

[mariah]

full of meaning and i could tell this was written from the heart. nice work!
-Mariah

[Marissa]

Thank You, and if definately was.

[mariah]

your welcome :P