Never Ending Love

I tried to make it free verse but also let it fall together.

You used to be proud,

Of everything we had.

 

But then I lost the feeling,

Of how you loved me.

 

I watched you walk away,

When I should've asked you to stay.

 

I miss our Love,

And our laughs.

 

You were my only one,

But I wasn't your number one.

 

I guess now is the time...

To say our good-bye,

And stop wasting all this time.

Reviews

[Southern Cross]

Heartfelt and raw emotions always have a place in my heart...nicely crafted :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Oooo.. I love this! I love the flow. It's like a song to me. And i love how you showed the pain of love here. Beautiful. Well done writing!!! =)