Never Ending Love

I tried to make it free verse but also let it fall together.

You used to be proud,

Of everything we had.

 

But then I lost the feeling,

Of how you loved me.

 

I watched you walk away,

When I should've asked you to stay.

 

I miss our Love,

And our laughs.

 

You were my only one,

But I wasn't your number one.

 

I guess now is the time...

To say our good-bye,

And stop wasting all this time.

Reviews

[Legolas]

So heartbreaking:( but great writing! Keep it up!

[Aehr]

short but it speaks what it needs to.. I loved it, the feel is really nnice

[Dayran]

It takes a great deal of courage to break free. Even more to say it in song. Congrats!

[afra]

awwwww ....^-^

[Btwixer]

short and to the point i enjoyed

[kayla]

Short and sweet, it's full of real-life experiences and emotions. I like the rhyme scheme(:

[C.]

Simple, but to the point. Loved it c: and I totally could relate

[Rene Velez]

keep writing, simple but it gets the point across.

[EMMIE]

Very creative and personal

[Dearantlers]

As usual, beautiful. You put your emotions in it so well that I'm feeling the emotions too. You are just such a gifted writer!