Unconditional

its about how a woman who is like my mom, lead me into being a better person... I love her just like a mom and I hope to never lose her...(:

You are the one who cared

the one who loved me

the one who believed in me

even when I didn't

 

I'm sorry for any pain

I may cause you

even though you say don't be

I am

 

I tell you your amazing

because you changed my life

you helped me

you even made me feel

important

 

Thanks for being

all that you are in my life

you make me wanna try

 

Imma be honest now

I don't wanna make you

feel like you have to continue

being all you are to me

 

I do love you

with all my heart

but you don't have to

stick around even as

much as I want you to

 

-I  will ALWAYS love you, no matter what

 

Author's Note

Please comment and let me know if you like it...or if it's good or bad...please and thank you (: p.s. sorry about the font I know it's dark and bold and it makes it seem like an angry poem, but I couldn't find any other color I really liked so please look past the boldness and darkness.

Reviews

[Btwixer]

I have felt this way a time or two, been there.

[C.]

I liked this c: I could relate to it, but not in the same exact way, haha. I feel this way about my best friend of 6 years

[Southern Cross]

expressing love and being thankful for love given to us is a beautiful thing..I'm sure she will appreciate this and will always continue to love you with all her heart...If I may just comment on one thing tho..the font was too bold and dark for this kind of emotion..it distracted from the tenderness and made it seem angry

[Dayran]

I can see that you would rather not get into a tug-of-war in your passions between the two mothers. Smart! Get a good book on mother goose, it might help.

[Dearantlers]

I loved it. You are so good at putting emotions into your poems. I don't even know this person, and yet, I think she's an amazing person who would do so much for others. I completely agree with every word that Brenda:) said. Great write!

[Martha Gilleece]

I think it's lovely and I hope the lady has read and enjoyed this too!

[lalala]

great write! very touching.

[Sleepless]

whio does not love their mother ?! this poem was cute ! you shoudl read it to her i made her a letter !!!! and you made me cry when you said she was there for you it was so touching! :') ! love the poem ! keep writing :)

[Norma M Sutton]

I like it. It is a nice dedication to a special person.