Unconditional

its about how a woman who is like my mom, lead me into being a better person... I love her just like a mom and I hope to never lose her...(:

You are the one who cared

the one who loved me

the one who believed in me

even when I didn't

 

I'm sorry for any pain

I may cause you

even though you say don't be

I am

 

I tell you your amazing

because you changed my life

you helped me

you even made me feel

important

 

Thanks for being

all that you are in my life

you make me wanna try

 

Imma be honest now

I don't wanna make you

feel like you have to continue

being all you are to me

 

I do love you

with all my heart

but you don't have to

stick around even as

much as I want you to

 

-I  will ALWAYS love you, no matter what

 

Author's Note

Please comment and let me know if you like it...or if it's good or bad...please and thank you (: p.s. sorry about the font I know it's dark and bold and it makes it seem like an angry poem, but I couldn't find any other color I really liked so please look past the boldness and darkness.

Reviews

[MOON]

Great tribute to your mother and her unconditional love.

[Marissa]

thanks!

[Leslie Philibert]

You write well, but it would be a shame if you stay a one subject poet !

[Marissa]

thank you! And yeah I know I've really got to get to writing other stuff...it's just I honestly didn't know if my stuff was good so I didn't worry about it.

[Dr. Wood ?]

It does give it a certain anger...But it IS hard to read, you really are good on this subject

[Marissa]

yeah I just noticed that I'm about to fix it....let me know what you think please! and what subject are you exactly talking about?

[Dr. Wood ?]

it's better now...MUCH better. great choice of colour...And the subject is Love, I suppose...the losing and finding and fighting and holding..etc...

[Marissa]

thank you! And I thought it'd be a nice color to do...and oh I gotcha now sorry I had a slow moment.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Love it it was awesome!

[Marissa]

thank you! I'm glad you love it (:

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem of love. Those kind people who give us kind words and positive motivation are needed. No weakness in the amazing poem of love.
Coyote

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

very sweet tribute for her!

she'll definitely enjoy this poem

[Aehr]

This is really sweet...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The font made it qutie hard to read, however the story and emotion read well.

[afra]

good job ..keep it up ...^_^

[Lindsay T]

This is really well-written and quite relateable. You have a gracefulness with words that I envy, because sometimes in my work my words feel clunky and out of place. Anyways, great job! You express yourself really nicely.