No Difference

No Difference

A Poem by Marissa

I got a lot on my mind

but you seem to think im fine

I lied when you asked why

because I didn't want to make you cry

 

Sometimes it's hard to

explain to you how

especially when now

is never the right time

 

You don't see my point

so why do I even try

I would rather cry

than waste my time lying

 

You make life difficult

but only because you're

jealous; jealous of what

I found with someone other

 

I'm sorry that it hurts you

but I really had to do

what felt best to me

and that is it

 

I do love you

I don't hate

but no matter what I say

it probably won't make a difference

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 Marissa


Author's Note

Marissa
let me know what you think...if you don't mind (:

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Last lines made the poem complete. I like the train of thoughts in the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ahhh..this is stunning! i love all the emotions in here. Powerful piece. i love it. =) Awesome job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


veryy good. yu culd feel the emotion flowing from it. great write

Posted 12 Years Ago


That's beautiful! I loved the way you wrote it, and your last stanza is very powerful! Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


lieing

that should be spelled lying and is really good your one of te few writers that i can actually go and stat rapping meaning that your rhyming is perfect and what the poem says i actually have been there because even if something bad happens to you , you want to tell them so bad but you know is not going to make a difference i love the poem keep writing :P

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 26, 2012
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Marissa
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Hi! Im Marissa I like writing poems and im not very good but it's how I get my feelings out. I'm a sophomore. Nothing better than friends and family. (but to me family isn't always blood) and well I l.. more..

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