No Difference

I got a lot on my mind

but you seem to think im fine

I lied when you asked why

because I didn't want to make you cry

 

Sometimes it's hard to

explain to you how

especially when now

is never the right time

 

You don't see my point

so why do I even try

I would rather cry

than waste my time lying

 

You make life difficult

but only because you're

jealous; jealous of what

I found with someone other

 

I'm sorry that it hurts you

but I really had to do

what felt best to me

and that is it

 

I do love you

I don't hate

but no matter what I say

it probably won't make a difference

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

let me know what you think...if you don't mind (:

Reviews

[MOON]

Lovely honest write.

[Marissa]

thanks!

[Leslie Philibert]

Like the verse form here, solid write

[Marissa]

thank you!

[Jordan A. Wilson]

i can dig the sentiments

[Marissa]

well that's a good thing lol (:

[Dr. Wood ?]

yes. more directness.....well said

[Marissa]

thank you! haha I have been working on the whole direct thing lol

[EileenMarie]

Nice and direct. Good piece!

[Legolas]

Good job:) very well written

[Emrys Realmskip]

Wow, this is how i feel most of the time! great job on capturing the emotions!
Loved it! :)
Savvy

[Chantel]

You do a great job of conveying your emotion throught your writing. I really enjoy it. It's so hard to know who to trust and what to say.
A few grammatical things again (I hope I don't annoy you, I just want to be helpful haha) :

"alot" should be "a lot" ...I used to use the former "alot" when I was writing emails and facebook messages, and I accidently led one of my friends into thinking that was actually how it was spelled...that was when I stopped using it XD

"ecspecially" = "especially" :)

"Only because your jealous" - "your" should be "you're" here :)

Then the "Im" to "I'm" thing again, in the first line o your fifth stanza.

Great piece though! A pleasure to read :)

[Aehr]

this is very well written. Many people can relate to this one. The rhyming was great in the beginning but it got a teensy-weensy off balance in the last two paragraphs. But hey, that happens right? And anyway, that's the way I look at it. Keep writing!!!

[mariah]

wow, i feel like i can completly relate to this. by the way, i love your poem writing style. it has great rythem. keep it up!